I remember vividly, holding your hand years back,
You used to show me the way, when it was cloudy and dark!!
I don’t know when and how my hand slipped away from yours;
I lost the touch and contact with you,
I had forgotten you, but you always guarded me,
You always loved me and cared for me,
Although when I didn’t care for you.
Today when I feel myself lost in this meaningless crowd,
Lost in the color, light, music, pomp and show of this world!!
My vision is clouded and I can’t see, I fall quite often,
Please hold my hand, I am tired, bewildered and lost!!
Show me the way; my path is all rough and steep,
Please hold my hand for I am hurt and in pain!!
Shower your love and care; please hold my hand once again.
You used to show me the way, when it was cloudy and dark!!
I don’t know when and how my hand slipped away from yours;
I lost the touch and contact with you,
I had forgotten you, but you always guarded me,
You always loved me and cared for me,
Although when I didn’t care for you.
Today when I feel myself lost in this meaningless crowd,
Lost in the color, light, music, pomp and show of this world!!
My vision is clouded and I can’t see, I fall quite often,
Please hold my hand, I am tired, bewildered and lost!!
Show me the way; my path is all rough and steep,
Please hold my hand for I am hurt and in pain!!
Shower your love and care; please hold my hand once again.
Hold my hand.. i guess your post i inspired by MJ's song... but i really enjoyed reading :P
ReplyDeletethanks, it shall be a pleasure to know the MJ's song, he is an all time inspiration
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A beautiful post, enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteWOW nice post, in valentine season, i like it Sonia...
ReplyDeleteHappy valentine to you all...
thanks Renee, u r welcome.
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Very nice - thank you!
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Beautiful lines
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ReplyDeleteYour blog just made me realise ... how as a child i used to pray to the almighty ... had so much of faith on him ... this reignited those old feelings in me ... love the way it has been written ..
Hi Parminder,
ReplyDeleteThis is the message, i exactly wanted to convey through these lines, u have just got it right.
Actually we only forget Him, but He always loves us and take care of us, even when we lose faith in Him..... And it can be reignited at any time, blockage is from our side only.....
Hi Sonia, I like your blog, esp this post. Very touching. I subscribed and am looking forward to reading more. I would be honored if you would check out my blog as well and perhaps subscribe.
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Hi Tiffany, thanks for appreciating and you are most welcome here, I shall check your blog as well, my pleasure.
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ReplyDeleteI arrived here from the Mom Bloggers Club. I am now following you through the Google Reader. I loved the poem. I like to write poetry, too, among other things.
Would you check out my blog:
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Blessings,
Rebecca Garcia
Hi Rebecca,
ReplyDeleteThanks for following me, I appreciate.
Regards, Sonia
Wow!! I can really feel my childhood days! I just love this poem. I read it twice! Would love to read more poems of this sort!!!
ReplyDeletethanks & u r welcome Mukund.
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ReplyDeleteyou are a good writer, I am visiting thru LR, thanks for the good review
Sincerely,
air
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Hi air,
ReplyDeletethanks for appreciation, u r welcome.
Inspirational as always... Nice post.
ReplyDeletethanks Shashank.
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